Negative Critique

In my negatives i found that I needed a little bit more focus on the images that I took pictures of. I also need to try to get better photographs by getting better facial expresions. I found, that a couple of my pictures have "Dead Space" not much, but it would still be better if I "Filled theFrame".

Filling the Frame

I think that this image is a good example of "Filling the Frame" because there is hardly any dead space, and even though there are alot of objects that were shot in this photograph, everything fits perfectly.

Action and Emotion

This photograph had alot of action going on in the background and the student in the desk shows emotion on her face. The emotion that the student is showing is of, a hard worker and really consentrated. The people in the background are very active, this is shown by the blurryness of the photograph.

The Story

I think that this picture tells a grate story, because these two people look like students at a school, and from the looks of it, they are having fun. This tells a story of how when these two gentelmen were in school, and young, they haad fun, and did adventerus things.

Inspiring

ATPI Fall Contest. I believe that this photo is powerful, or has a powerful meaning because, these two gesse resemble pure love and what makes the picture more powerful is that the two gesse's neck and head form a heart. Wich a heart is a symbol for love. White is the symbol for purity. It has very good lighting, it looks like it was taken out in the day light.

Diffrences

I think that the diffrence between the pinhole camera and the SLR camera is that with the pinhole you couldnt really be sure on what you were taking a picture of. With the SLR you are sure of what you are taking a picture of, because you can look through the lense and see.

Dislike

I dislike this picture, alot. It is too blurry and it makes the image (person) look like a ghost. This picture does not capture alot of emotion.

Good One

I really, really, like this picture. I think that the photografer did a grate job. I like the objects in this picture, I also, like how and were they stand.

Bad Picture

This is a bad picture, because their is alot of dead space. Also, there is not much emotion shown

Good Picture

I really like this picture. This photografer captured the image when the person was showing emotion. This is a candid moment, and there is not alot of dead space.